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3.10: More Extensive Visits

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In this rather long segment (approx. 8 minutes), we have more extensive visits to Ms. Estline's and Ms. Quezada's classrooms. We also hear from them what they are working on and how their grade level meetings inform what they are doing in their classes. Notice the focused environment that helps children acquire literacy skills in reading and writing while maintaining a very high degree of positive affect. Note also how important the process of specifying learning goals, assessing students, discussing student progress, and trying out instructional strategies--all at the grade level meetings--has become.

Yael	

	The grade level meetings really help us to clarify
	what sorts of concepts the kids need based on how they're
	doing in the assessments.  We know what areas they need to
	strengthen.  With the past assessment, we realized that the
	kids needed more practice with sight words, with red words. 
	And so we really practiced "say-spell-say" a lot.  We fit it
	in to our morning message.  We fit it in to our modeling
	when we do our journal writing.

Students	

	Today is Tuesday.

Yael	

	What's missing?

Students	

	Is.

Yael	

	Is.  You know how to spell is?  Lets do say spell
	say.  Ready?

Students	

	Is.  I - S.  Is.  We will publish.

Yael	

	Are we missing something right here?

Students	

	We.

Yael	

	We.  The word we.

Students	

	We.  W - E.  We.

Yael	

	Very good.  (?) remember that that's a capital.

Students	

	W- E We, we.  Lower case e

Student	

	Hooray for Kevin P!

Yael	

	Hooray for Kevin!

Yael	

	We um, go around, for example, in  my classroom with
	a red ladybug and we make sure that they have those red
	words somewhere in their writing.  That they realize that
	they're important and they get a little bit of help from the
	puppet.

Yael	

	And (?)

Student	

	My hat.

Yael	

	Aha! I see a my.  Good job.

Yael	

	In addition to that, we try to tie that, I, my
	classroom tried to tie that to the Star Story, which was Big
	Mama today.  And in Big Mama, there was a man reflecting on
	his childhood.  So, the children had to think of something
	that they really enjoyed from when they were younger or even
	yesterday for them, they are young, and write that into
	their journals.

Student	

	I thought after (?) we were going to do journals.

Yael	

	Yeah, we are going to do our journals now.

Student	

	What are you going to write about?

Student	

	About you!

Yael	

	I'm going to write about my good memories. 
	Everybody has memories of things they once did with their
	family that they really, really liked.  And when I was
	little I would walk with my grandpa to the market and we
	would always buy my grandma flowers.

Student	

	What color were the flowers?

Yael	

	You're going to find out.  How do I spell "I"?

Students	

	Capital I,  I

Yael	

	Always a capital.  Right, even, it's in the
	beginning of a sentence, but even if it's not, I need a
	capital.  I remember.  What do I have to put here?

Students	

	R.

Yael	

	(?)  Remember.  Rrrr  Re-m-m-m.  eh-eh-eh-emmmm. 
	b-b-b-b.   er.

Ss	

	(Call out letters as Ms. Estline articulates their
	sounds)

Yael	

	My grandma.  My.

Students	

	M--  M-Y.  My.

Yael	

	Very good.  That's a red word.  Okay.  I'm going to
	read and make sure that this makes sense.  You ready?  I
	remember my grandma.  Stop.  Does that make sense?

Students	

	Yeah.

Yael	

	Yes.  My grandpa and I would.

Students	

	Would.

Yael	

	Did I forget a word?  I did.  Good writers always go
	back and .....

Students	

	Read.

Yael	

	Read.  That's why because I forgot to write would. 
	My grandpa and I would buy her flowers.

Yael	

	Also when I'm modeling my writing before they go and
	write into their journals, I stop at the red words and I
	think about where I'm going to use my red words and I remind
	them more to look at the red word wall.  They also get mini
	word walls on their desks while they're writing.

Yael	

	Where do I find red words in the classroom?

Students	

	(Pointing)  There!

Yael	

	That's right.

Student	

	Mini word wall.

Yael	

	They are right behind Ms. Estline.  Right here on
	the red word wall.  And where else can you find red words?

Student	

	Mini word wall.

Yael	

	On your mini word wall that I pass out to you when
	you're writing.

Yael	

	In order for them not to just give you a list of red
	words, we have to know that communication is a big part of
	it.  They scored lower on communication and we really wanted
	to get that up.  And that's where they're getting across an
	idea when they're writing and not just a bunch of words.

Yael	

	Put your finger on your head, and think about
	something that you really loved that you did once with your
	family.  That you really loved and you'll remember forever. 
	Because you're going to write in your journal today about
	something you did that you really, really have a good memory
	from.  And we're going to write about that today.

Student	

	(sounding out as she writes)

Yael	

	Something that you did yesterday even.  Anything
	that you did before today that you really enjoyed doing. 
	Something you've done before, with your family...

Yael	

	Mia Robinson is our writing coach.  Every week Mia
	shows us something else that we do.  And she's had us, for
	example, do a um, practice a um predictive sentence
	building.  And that's something that we started yesterday
	that we're going to complete today after our rotations.  And
	when I did that first time, this isn't the first time I've
	done it.  I took it back to the grade level and I showed
	them how it worked in my classroom.  And every one of us um
	gets the presentation done by Mia.  We usually bring it back
	the next time and share it and tell everyone how it worked.

Student	

	(writing, sounding out).  Thanks!

Yael	

	Everybody stop.  That was ten minutes of writing.

Student	

	(re-reads what he wrote) Goody, goody, goody!

Tina	

	I noticed that my children, they needed more site
	words than more um daily oral language, which they were
	putting some words, some sight words but they weren't
	putting them in the right place.  Not only did I see this
	with my group, but I also saw it in the grade level and we
	were sharing our journals and our papers and our
	assessments.  We noticed that the children were site words
	but maybe not making complete sentences out of them.  So
	this is what we're trying to do with the journals and the
	daily oral language so that the children get the strategies
	so they could go back and independently do their work and
	using the room environment.

Tina	

	Now read it and make sure it makes sense ok?  Or do
	you want to take out a word?

Student	

	No.

Tina	

	No?  Okay read it back to yourself.

Tina	

	So what I'm having them do is actually sound out the
	words, listen to the sentence and make sure it makes sense. 
	So that's what we're doing right now with daily oral
	language and then incorporating it into the journals.

Student	

	Ms. Quezada, I'm using "has."

Tina	

	Good job!  Did you just used a word that we learned?
	Good!

Students	

	(writing, sounding out words).

Tina	

	Remember the word "the"?  the?

Student	

	Th.

Tina	

	Th.  Right?  (?)  What (?)

Student	

	(?)

Tina	

	That's right.  Okay.  (?)  You got it.  You got it.

	I saw a tyrannosaurus.  That's what you wrote!  And look, I
	like the way you left a space between your words.  Right
	here you just put it all together. You need enough space. 
	What did you write there?

Student	

	Little (pronounced 'liddo')

Tina	

	Little.  Okay.  What was your sentence?  What was
	your sentence?

Student	

	(reading and sounding out)

Tina	

	T, right.  (student writes) That's better.